vocals... :(

The vocals are a bit too "whiney", and they seem slightly off-key pretty frequently...half of this I attribute to the fact that the singer (you?) seems to be singing a bit too high for their voice. I thought the voice at around 1:58 and 3:47 was something you really need to work on especially, the effect seemed too forced, and it generally just sounded bad. It would have been better if that was dropped completely. Overall, I'd suggest to work a bit more on the vocals and try not to sound as strained.

Good Work!

Very well done. Definitely what I'd call a "euphoric" song - very uplifting. The vocals seem slightly odd with the long pauses between the words, but overall I'd say it's pretty nice. :)